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Report editing for Save the Children charity

Project: editing full-length child poverty report into shorter versions for Save the Children Scotland

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Top charity Save the Children commissioned a major two-year study into the impact of poverty on young people's access to services in Scotland. The full, 120+ page report - 'Serving Children?' - was produced by researchers from the universities of Glasgow and Strathclyde and completed in early Spring 2007. I was then commissioned to edit two 6 page report versions - one to maximise the communication of key findings to adults, the other to target young people aged 10 to 14.

Objective: To make the contents of a complex and detailed academic report accessible to a more general adult audience and the 10 to 14 age group upon which the report focuses. This required a shift in tone of voice towards a more conversational style for both versions, with short sentences and appropriate vocabulary especially important for the young people's edition 'Access All Areas?'

Download report version for young people (pdf - 613kb)
Download report version for adults (pdf - 317kb)

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INTRODUCTION TO 'ACCESS ALL AREAS'

WHAT’S THE REPORT ABOUT - AND WHY DID WE PRODUCE IT?
Access All Areas? is a young people’s edition of the Serving Children? report - a large project that explores how young people see and use ‘services’ in their lives.

‘Services’ in this case includes things such as healthcare, leisure facilities (parks and play areas - for example) and shops.

The study was designed to explore whether young people who are less
well off lose out by not being able to take advantage of services as much as those from better off backgrounds.

It’s not, of course, the first time that anyone has studied how poverty affects young people.

Previous work, though, has measured the actual number affected or listened to what adults think.

This study is important because it focuses on gathering young people’s opinions on the range of services they use – what helps them and what difficulties they face.

We hope that our report will help councils and other organisations plan better services that more young people can benefit from - especially those from less well off homes.

   

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